Sabtu, 13 Agustus 2011

Will It Be Possible to Live Forever ?


     Some people said that in a little more than 50 years people can live forever. This is a shocking statement because I, myself do not really think about this. If we live forever it means that we will not die and we cannot die.
     It is true that many inventions now days can invent  new technology and maybe they can make people to live forever in this world. Because of their smartness and creativity they invent something perfect and unusual to make people stay alive forever. Maybe they also make a technology that can help us if we nearly die or dying, they can make us alive again. So all people in this world can live forever.
     But I do not think that people can live forever in this world. Because the cleverness of people cannot match the cleverness of god (if you believe in god). God create everything in this world. And He says that all things that have a soul will surely die. So clever as clever we are, we still cannot create something to make people live forever in this world.  
     And it will not be nice if all people in this world can live forever. Because if people can live forever in this world, the world would become a chaotic place. And people, they surely will have children and their children will grow up and have their own children. Because people can live forever in this world, so all people in this world stay alive forever, the world will get very crowded. So, we live forever but we cannot enjoy our life because of the disturbing environment around us. And of course more stress we had. That’s totally become a nightmare.
     To conclude this essay, I would like to say that is impossible to live forever. In 50 years maybe we have many inventors that invent many new inventions that can be useful and can improve or simplify our lives. But it will not make us stay alive forever in this world and make us immortal.

By Nadia Khairunnisa XB

3 komentar:

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    Nabila Shaza XB/25

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