Introduction
The reason why I post this is because Indonesian culture has not been appreciated by most people, and I want to show in this article about how cool is Indonesian Culture. I have surveyed about 8 people in a person about what they think of Indonesian and Western Culture.
Findings
What western culture most visible in Indonesia?
Free Sex: We can see or heard that many Indonesian people have sex before age. It’s because many people have watched western movie that show us about teenagers having love and after that, having sex. Because of that, most teenagers want to try what it feel so they do many thing.Clothing Style: When we go to mall and other favorite place we can see that most Indonesian people (adult and teenagers) wearing clothing western style. Rarely seen people who wear “batik”.
What Indonesian culture that we must maintained?
There are many Indonesian culture and cloth style that we can mention. Take a look on Indonesian art. “Batik” is a cloth that made with a very talented hand. Many of “batik” can reach a price of five million.
About music, Indonesia have many thing to show. Take a look on Gamelan. Gamelan is a musical ensemble from around Java, that show a variety of instruments such as mettalophones, xylophones, drums, and a bamboo flutes. That kind of instruments is rarely seen in other places. 
Conclusion
From this article we can see that Indonesian also have many cool thing to see and we must maintained it.
Following western culture is not bad or wrong, but remember that we must not follow the bad part like free sex, etc. We must take the good part and try to make our beloved country better.
Alvian Putra Adhitama X-B/3
Alvian Putra Adhitama X-B/3
i can see that you're trying to write. You're trying to change Indonesian citizen, teenagers especially, way of thinking that indonesian culture is as good as the western, or maybe even better. I have to say this is a really good post and there's nothing i could fault in this post.
BalasHapus-Dhia Nada Nabila XB(Group 3)