Introduction
The purpose of this of this report is to show what were happened in Indonesia. I started with interviewed ten of my friends, by Blackberry Messenger and in a person. The question concerned public transportation, teenager lifestyle, and Indonesian government.
Findings
Public Transportations
TransJakarta is the one of Indonesian public transportation |
From ten people that I had interviewed , three-quarters from them said that the public transportations in Indonesia was in bad condition. Ten percent said that the cost was cheap, and the rest of the people that I interviewed told that Jakarta’s public transportations was well enough.
A half of them chose bus for their usually public transportations, twenty percent chose taxi, and ten percent chose hired motorcycle.
Eighty percent of them said that they had disappointed with the public transportation services. And the rest said that they had not disappointed with the public transportation services.
Teenager Lifestyle
Teenager |
A half of them said that they were just like the ordinary teenager , one of them said that he or she is diligent, and the rest said that they were try to adapted in their surroundings.
Most of them suggested that teenager should stay out of consuming drug and enjoy smoking. And twenty percent said that teenager should be religious.
Indonesian Government
Hundred percent of them told that the government in Indonesia is still very bad.
And all of them said too that governments have not implemented all obligations, because many of them are corrupt and do not think people with low economic. and sixty percent of them advised to the government to stop corruption, and the rest said that the government should be more selective in choosing new members in order to avoid mistakes in the future.
Conclusion
From all of this report I find out the most people said that the transportation in Indonesia is still not good enough to meet the needs of the Indonesian people, neither does the government.
Indonesian people are smart, but not consistent with what they said (especially in government). But Indonesia has a lot of people who are smart but spread, so it is a potential for Indonesia in the decade to come. Why ten years? Because I think the present government and the two future periods is still difficult to eradicate corruption and to organize the government for the better. If these reforms continue as expected, then this country will be the number one country in southeast Asia, because of the potential of human, nature and the many more. And the next 30 years I believe Indonesia can compete with developed countries like Japan and China.
There is repetitive usage of unnecessary past tense, such as the words 'was' and 'said' in the paragraph about teenager lifestyle and others.
BalasHapusThere might need to be a little more detail in the paragraphs so we can understand the subject more.
The conclusion is well written, overall this is a good essay.
-Savanna Segara/35/XB